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gokuma ([personal profile] gokuma) wrote2009-07-08 08:09 pm

Drabl Piaskownicowy/Sandbox Society drabble

...Czyli z Bleachowego "Sandbox Society", które majstrujemy sobie z [profile] bosska_ak , [livejournal.com profile] marinliliz  i [livejournal.com profile] marianek . Boss narysowała ślicznego arta z Komamurą niosącym synka do domu bliźniaków (Susumu ma tam spędzić noc, dlatego ma ze sobą torbę - z piżamą i szczoteczką do zębów :D). [profile] bosska_ak zainspirowała ten drabl, więc jest dla niej.... :3




                                                             Coś dobrego


      W domu Yuu i Rena wszystko było spokojne i miękkie. Bliźniacy dziwili się, gdy im to mówił - w końcu sami robili dość dużo hałasu. Susumu nie wiedział, jak to dobrze wyjaśnić, brakowało mu wyrazów, ale to, co czuł, było wyraźne: wielkie, różowe i białe fale, wypełniające dom jak morze, krążące w nim bez ustanku, splatające się i rozplatające - zawsze razem.
- Macie fajny dom - mówił Susumu, ziewając i rozpakowując w pokoju bliźniaków swój ulubiony zielony plecak. Yuu i Ren przytakiwali: z "fajny" zgadzali się w zupełności.

Zasypiali szybko. Śnili o statkach, muszlach i olbrzymich, szumiących falach.




                  



                                        Something right



Everything in Yuu and Ren's house was really soft and calm. The twins were always surprised when he told them about this - after all, they were making quire a lot of noise. Susumu had no idea how to explain this special thing, he couldn't find the right words - but he felt it very clearly: the enormous, pink and white waves filling the house like a sea, incessantly circulating, twining nad untwining - but always staying together.
"You've got an awesome house" Susumu was saying, yawning and unpacking his favourite green bag. The twins were nodding: they were fine with "awesome".

And then they were falling asleep. Asleep, dreaming - about big ships, seashells, and enormous, humming waves.






Feel free to point out any mistakes ^^'
*Thanks for Boss's helping paw* The pink and white *sea* is of course Shunsui and Ukitake's reiatsu  : )


ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Gin)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 07:05 pm (UTC)(link)
This is in Polish!!!T__T I did get drabble, Yuu and Ren, Susumu and that was it.XD *searches for online translater*
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ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Gin)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 09:18 pm (UTC)(link)
^___________________^

[identity profile] marianek.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 07:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Mały Susumu jeszcze nie wiedział jak nazwać reiastu, ale czuł, że to coś bardzo, bardzo dobrego i bezpiecznego jak ramiona czy poła płaszcza taty ^^

Śliczne :)

[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 10:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww... <3 Jaki ładny komentarz! Uwielbiam opisywać reiatsu Ukitake i Shunsui... no i we własnym domu nie muszą go *pilnować*, więc domyślam się, że ogarnia i wypełnia wszystko, co tylko może :)
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[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-09 08:34 am (UTC)(link)
*nuzzles Boss's fur* That's because you're nice and inspiring wolf :)))
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Smiling Ukitake)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 09:44 pm (UTC)(link)
There's a few misspellings and I would change: The twins were always surprised when he was telling them about this to "The twins were always surprised when he told them about this".

Other than that is perfect. I like the idea of Susumu feeling and enjoying Shunsui's and Ukitake's reiatsu. Squee on the green bag and the adorableness of this babies of ours.^__^

And thank you for taking the trouble to translate it for me♥♥♥.*hugs and squeezes*
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[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 10:03 pm (UTC)(link)
And they can threaten you with a full bath!
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Renji ok)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
MUAHAHAHA!!! So they canXD

[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 10:38 pm (UTC)(link)
*edited*

I love describing Ukitake and Shunsui and their reiatsu :3 It's amazing that they live so long - I think that at least some of the shinigamis (and most of other people living in Soul Society) consider them more as some kind of elements, natural *force* than living people. I can easily imagine a university somewhere in Seiritei - and bunch of historians scribbling books and theses about their 2000-years-old relationship... :D

And I think that this kind of couple would be one of the first to decide for a baby (if mpregs were really possible). They've seen and gone through so many things together (as lovers, friends - I guess that sometimes even as enemies) that they're ones really *ready* to make this kind of decision. Byakuya's pregnancy was decided by Kuchiki clan, Tousen's - was a kind of unpredicted and totally surprising side effect and I like the thought that Ukitake ans Shunsui would make this decision consciusly, after thinking it over...

//rambling mode off
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- ShunUki)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2009-07-08 11:05 pm (UTC)(link)
The description was really well achieved. It's calm and soothing but so powerful that it can be felt by just being in a place where they spend time. I'm thinking Susumu is a powerful little furry ball, given the way he was conceived, but I also think that other people less reiatsu perceiving would feel it in ShunUki's house. And mostly as a calm and soft environment, only changeable if either of them or their loved ones were in danger.

I too, like the idea that they decided to have children and it didn't just happen by accident or demand.

*is excited with this universe of ours*

[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-09 08:29 am (UTC)(link)
*is excited too and squees after reading the "powerful little furry ball" line* :)))

Somhow it makes me think of this =>

Image (http://icanhascheezburger.com/2009/06/02/funny-pictures-into-a-lolcat/)
see more Lolcats and funny pictures (http://icanhascheezburger.com)

:D
ext_62835: icon by otaku3chan ([Bleach]- Smiling Ukitake)

[identity profile] marinliliz.livejournal.com 2009-07-09 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
*dies of cute* I love Lolcats♥

[identity profile] motylkowa.livejournal.com 2009-07-09 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
No proszę, zajrzy człowiek wieczorem na LJa i ile nowych cudów znajdzie! I arty (z Komamurą i Kaname <3), i nawet drabbla.
W dodatku prześlicznego drabbla. Ten spokój, który Susumu odczuwa w domu bliźniaków wręcz się czuje i widzi się te fale nie do końca pilnowanego reiatsu, którego Susumu jeszcze nie umie odpowiednio nazwać. Dzieciaki w tym drabblu są takie prawdziwe, to ich "fajny" takie...typowe, a sny bardzo dziecięce. No i ten dom Ukitake i Kyouraku - spokojny i miękki, czyli dokładnie taki, jaki powinien być.
Pozostaje mi już tylko ogłosić oczywiste - czekam na więcej maluchów (i ich rodziców, jak Bóg da).

[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-09 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
Dziękuję za opinię :))) Jak to ktoś powiedział (czy raczej napisał), comments feed the Muse...

...Nawet jeśli ta Muza ma w ręku wiaderko i foremki :D

[identity profile] ravens-rising.livejournal.com 2009-07-18 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh. I like this idea a lot. *___* Very nice!

[identity profile] gokuma.livejournal.com 2009-07-18 05:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! ^^